Tuesday, June 3, 2014

The Maze Finder
Corrie
Thomas and the brave enough gladers who went along with the plan were about to reach the griever hole. When they turned the corner they found themselves in front of a horde of grievers. "Oh bloody hell they expected us" said Newt angrily staring at the grievers. Thomas and the gang knew what they had to do just get to the hole and it will all be over. Suddenly for what seemed as no apparent reason Alby ran like a mad man straight at the grievers he managed to defeat a few knock a few into the hole and then fall down himself. Now the rest of the gladers began to scramble to fight and get to the griever hole and not die. The battle lasted for about a half an hour, and after that time all the grievers were dead or fell down the hole, and there was only one thing left to do jump into the hole.

At the bottom was something unexpected aside from all the dead griever bodies and Alby's corpse. Ahead were two large doors almost like the ones in the Glade. "Well what are we waiting for we just going sit here or bloody get out of here" and with Newts words everybody ran for the doors, and once through they all made a discovery. It appeared that they were in a another place like the Glade only sort of different. Then the gladers heard a voice "Ah welcome we see you finally passed the test gladers. But the time for fun and games is over welcome to your next trial in another maze with even more deadly creatures. Don't worry you will still receive supplies but, newbie's will come every 40 days instead of every month. Now we know what you must be feeling like right now oh why are we still here, why are they so cruel, where is the next exit, how will we find it, why is the guy talking to us wondering all these things out loud to us". "Pfffffff he has the last one right" whispered Teresa". "Now since you guys took approximately 2.36 years to do the first maze we set the bar you could say lower. You now have about a year and 139 days till we decide were bored and deem you all fail or we will pull the whole two person thing and then everything falls apart scenario again, it just worked on you to move your butts out of there".


Everyone Stood there listening to the person's rambling and when he finished he said a few final things. " Remember this always watch your back and be prepared this time around because here we hired and trained youth like you to attempt to murder you guys just like this young man just accomplished while I distracted you." Just then everybody turned around and they saw the dead body of one of the med-jacks that survived. The gladers all gasped in horror at this sight and became very angry. "Now now children anger will only solve nothing you must learn to move on or you won't be able to exit your next trial remember that very well it just might help or not who knows certainly not I". After saying that he laughed and then silence broke out among everybody. The gladers were now faced with another maze harder and with less time to do so and on top of that they had people waiting to murder them. Thomas may have just solved the maze but he just found another one.

1 comment:

  1. There are a few grammar issues, but overall, good job.

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