The
Maze Finder
Corrie
Thomas and the brave enough gladers who went along
with the plan were about to reach the griever hole. When they turned the corner
they found themselves in front of a horde of grievers. "Oh bloody hell
they expected us" said Newt angrily staring at the grievers. Thomas and
the gang knew what they had to do just get to the hole and it will all be over.
Suddenly for what seemed as no apparent reason Alby ran like a mad man straight
at the grievers he managed to defeat a few knock a few into the hole and then
fall down himself. Now the rest of the gladers began to scramble to fight and
get to the griever hole and not die. The battle lasted for about a half an
hour, and after that time all the grievers were dead or fell down the hole, and
there was only one thing left to do jump into the hole.
At the bottom was something unexpected aside from
all the dead griever bodies and Alby's corpse. Ahead were two large doors almost
like the ones in the Glade. "Well what are we waiting for we just going
sit here or bloody get out of here" and with Newts words everybody ran for
the doors, and once through they all made a discovery. It appeared that they
were in a another place like the Glade only sort of different. Then the gladers
heard a voice "Ah welcome we see you finally passed the test gladers. But
the time for fun and games is over welcome to your next trial in another maze
with even more deadly creatures. Don't worry you will still receive supplies
but, newbie's will come every 40 days instead of every month. Now we know what
you must be feeling like right now oh why are we still here, why are they so cruel,
where is the next exit, how will we find it, why is the guy talking to us
wondering all these things out loud to us". "Pfffffff he has the last
one right" whispered Teresa". "Now since you guys took approximately
2.36 years to do the first maze we set the bar you could say lower. You now
have about a year and 139 days till we decide were bored and deem you all fail or
we will pull the whole two person thing and then everything falls apart
scenario again, it just worked on you to move your butts out of there".
Everyone Stood there listening to the person's
rambling and when he finished he said a few final things. " Remember this
always watch your back and be prepared this time around because here we hired
and trained youth like you to attempt to murder you guys just like this young
man just accomplished while I distracted you." Just then everybody turned
around and they saw the dead body of one of the med-jacks that survived. The
gladers all gasped in horror at this sight and became very angry. "Now now
children anger will only solve nothing you must learn to move on or you won't
be able to exit your next trial remember that very well it just might help or
not who knows certainly not I". After saying that he laughed and then
silence broke out among everybody. The gladers were now faced with another maze
harder and with less time to do so and on top of that they had people waiting
to murder them. Thomas may have just solved the maze but he just found another
one.
There are a few grammar issues, but overall, good job.
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